not bad..... intresting into and a good first chapter
be looking froward to the next part

are you going to do some back ground info too?

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Thanks. yup. I inject it as I go. The baddies will be getting equal time.
=^.^=

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^_^.... cool that makes for a better story and a more rounded plot

I always try to have the a little POV chapters for all my main charaters if I can get away from it

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Where did ye come up with the names you used in that? I mean...Is there any significance to them? o.O I dunno...just curious. 'Tis kinda neat though. =3

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Thanks! I'm an amateur astronomer so all the places are real except for the fictional alien names. (of course)
I don't toss around nomenclature like Star Trek does.
;) "I bet 50 Klystrons!" (What? you're using old microwave tubes instead of money?)
*giggles*
Cyclopia is a name from the older Martian (pre-Viking)maps though. I think it may have fallen into non-use.
Lacus Mortus (Lake of Death) is in wikipedia lunar maps.
Asterope is a star in constellation Pleades. (also one of the 7 daughters of Atlas from Greek myths. The seven ladies were made immortal by being placed in the sky by Zeus and now are forever being chased by Orion the hunter.)
It's all good fun. =^.^=

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:| That...is...AWESOME! I never would have thought to use such coolness for names. T-T I'd probably just use weird names like Eschplectar or Glurglesplech. Props to you, my unorthodox ally. And have a Kirby for good luck.
(>'.')> o
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(>'O')> >-+o -Aaaahh!
(>^-^)>
(Errr...Kirby just ate a guy...It looks kinda crappy though. =] )

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Heehee!
I still have to make some shit up, but reality is full of interesting stuff to use. :)

Gotta love Kirby. ;)

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Reality is only good for distorting into our own little fantasies. =] And our realities are best for escaping reality. Gotta love that little vicious cycle.
Hell yeah Kirby is awesome! =D I made a Kirby for my pinata final thingie for my Spanish class. He took over six fuggin' hours. :| AND I had help from..six different people! He was worth it though. =3 Kirby is always worth it.

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Hmmm. Gurglesplech sounds like a Klingon delecacy!

Almost as popular as Glarg!

Heeheehee!

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